OK I have left it as ambiguous as possible to accomodat subsequent events so I don't thinkyou need change much..... I hope..after all all this is the events of a few seconds ... bound to be an element of chaos....
Leoflic will probably need a sledgehammer to gain Elfride's attention - as Hama's post indicates, in some respects she is very dim. However I suggest we concentrate on fighting for a while