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What you've done with Kara is fine Lommy.
Frodides, though, is unlikely to call the children "those little darlings" in anything other than a sarcastic tone of voice. Perhaps that sentence could be changed to:
"Strange that they haven't yet come looking for food, they must be so into their games they've clear forgotten about eating."
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“If more of us valued food and cheer and song above hoarded gold, it would be a merrier world.”
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