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Originally Posted by Lai
"We do not know for sure that such a man is dangerous, Trystan," Falco interjected slowly, watching the other carefully.
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I need you to change this, Lai, so it sounds more like Falco:
"I reckon this big people is no more dangerous than any other of you log-footed folk, Trystan," said Falco, watching the other carefully."
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Originally Posted by Lai
To have a ruffian of such dimensions on the loose near the Mead Hall, with women and children present - and valuable horses too, of course," he added, with another brief grin, which Falco this time returned:
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I need this altered just a wee bit:
".... , to which Falco allowed a reluctant half smile:"