Alrighty.
I've posted now. Please do see whether it is okay by you as I have used Khamir a little and in fact made Athwen suffer a hit.
And if the description of the overall battle around the tunnel is ok. with you.
Naturally I will change / edit everything you don't like.
Just a few comments/questions.
Folwren: Hopefully it's okay that Athwen is hit to the ground. In turn you may use Hadith the way you wish as I have ended my post in a most open situation. Just remember that even though Hadith is a somewhat promising soldier, he's not a ready one (so, prone to make mistakes or anyhow being the weaker of the two fighting).
Durelin: Khamir getting as one of the first into the middle of the action sounded right to me. Is it right with you too?
Tevildo: I hope I haven't destroyed Dorran's possible plans of saving Athwen... and I think it's still quite probable that those two will need some help anyhow, at least if yet another slaver would appear on the sight.
PS. I'mstill wishing you to leave the killing of Joshwan to me...
