You are right, it is wrong  But I might say that you went further in one thing: for the first time you did not make one mistake which was in all the previous posts.
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"Should the story say 'he ate bread,' the dramatic producer can only show 'a piece of bread' according to his taste or fancy, but the hearer of the story will think of bread in general and picture it in some form of his own." -On Fairy-Stories
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