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Durelin · 02-26-2007, 12:41 PM

I'm so glad your mother is alright, Child! And I do hope things stay/get calmer for you.

I agree about the "stuck"-ness. While it would be nice for everyone to have a little conversation, moving on is best. Would it perhaps even be best for the departure (and perhaps even the arrival?) to be covered in your/a narrative post, as well?

In your post when you have Lindir lay out the plan, Child, could you perhaps have Beloan contribute something to this, even if it's just some sort of agreement? I think everyone's going to start working together better, and that would be a nice sign of it, I think. That was the only "important" thing other than general plot stuff that I imagined occurring in the discussion. Thanks so much if you could.

As for who's going, Khamir will definitely want to, but in his condition cannot, unless someone puts him on a horse. None of my characters can make it, I'd say. Typical.

If you'd like to use NPC Nasim or Gamal as among those who go, they could be tossed around. Beloan didn't seem to get severely injured, so perhaps he could be carried along either by Nogrod or myself, unless he stays behind to keep things organized in the slave camp.

02-26-2007, 12:41 PM	#964
Durelin Estelo dagnir, Melo ring Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 3,063	I'm so glad your mother is alright, Child! And I do hope things stay/get calmer for you. I agree about the "stuck"-ness. While it would be nice for everyone to have a little conversation, moving on is best. Would it perhaps even be best for the departure (and perhaps even the arrival?) to be covered in your/a narrative post, as well? In your post when you have Lindir lay out the plan, Child, could you perhaps have Beloan contribute something to this, even if it's just some sort of agreement? I think everyone's going to start working together better, and that would be a nice sign of it, I think. That was the only "important" thing other than general plot stuff that I imagined occurring in the discussion. Thanks so much if you could. As for who's going, Khamir will definitely want to, but in his condition cannot, unless someone puts him on a horse. None of my characters can make it, I'd say. Typical. If you'd like to use NPC Nasim or Gamal as among those who go, they could be tossed around. Beloan didn't seem to get severely injured, so perhaps he could be carried along either by Nogrod or myself, unless he stays behind to keep things organized in the slave camp.