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Old 06-17-2007, 04:14 PM   #1799
littlemanpoet
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littlemanpoet is battling Black Riders on Weathertop.littlemanpoet is battling Black Riders on Weathertop.
There's a contradiction between something I wrote in post # 801 & what Foley wrote in post # 805.

#801:
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She gave him not even a glance, holding the eyes of the Eorl, who agreed to her offer. He sent Haleth on ahead with the two headed dead man, then he and his men showed her each of their kills to Rowenna.
#805:
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The entire group set off. Some of the guards of Meduseld took up Rilef’s body and walked behind Thornden. The others from the Mead Hall walked behind those – Garmund going directly behind Rilef, looking crushed and depressed.
I like what you wrote in 805, but then I need to figure out how to change 801 so there's not such a huge party of cavalry in the way while Rowenna identifies the dead. Any ideas?
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