At least for myself - quite nice,
Nog! I am not going to meddle into this music arrangement and other stuff, but I won't have any objections if this were to play there. Other comments? From the beginning, it sounds like Pink Floyd's Sorrow (of course, because there's the synthetiser and nothing else

), or overall it sounds like the music from Diablo

Or am I to offer responsible criticism? Maybe I would expect... "softer" thing. This is way too... dark? ... "raw"... but as I said, I'd accept that there, and overall I don't care whether there's going to be music or not (Hm... so why am I writing this. Maybe so that you have at least some feedback

).