Actually, Foley, it crossed my mind that you might have Saeryn say that yes, she would marry, but not tonight. But it's better this way. More Eorling, I hope to think.
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Originally Posted by Gwathagor
Well, I'd bet Saeryn will be (expecting) pretty soon.  |
Good one Gwath!
Foley, I must request that you add the following in between the whispered words and her pulling away.
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For sheer joy Eodwine hed her tight and spun her around in the air, careless of the formalities of court. And just as careless of said social ordinances, he set her on her feet, drew her face toward his, and kissed her on the lips.
"You know I love you!" he cried.
The crowd whooped and applauded.
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Thanks in advance.
But now the order of events for the remainder of the day must be revised, as follows:
Sword fight Crabannan, Dan, Eodwine, Degas, Garstan, Stigend, Aethelstan, Erbrand, Balvir, Matrim, Ginna--> GWATHAGOR
Wedding
Feast
Dancing
Riddles Dan, Eodwine, Javan, Degas, Wilcred