I just added three more paragraphs. Have a peek.
You know, Helen, reading the story from post to post is a different experience than reading each entry days apart as it builds. I find it quite moving, bringing tears of sympathy and joy. I'm actually finding myself in sympathy with both Nimrodel and Amroth, which I couldn't quite accomplish in the post by post build.
EDIT: I just read your most recent post. That's exactly what I thought of doing next!

But now what?