With a first glance Groin's post is okay eg. it fits well with Foley's and mine.
Foley: we could possibly emerge our posts into one? I think there are no discrepancies as such but we could trim it into one post for the story's sake.
I have no time for it right now as it is 1AM and I have an early morning call, but for my part we can call it a deal now and edit the posts in a day or two.
Anyone else wishing to make their contributions to the situation? Please write what you have in mind for your characters.
The next thing I think would be that the landlords and their party would leave. And if you want to write for any reactions after they have left, feel free to do it. I'll try to bring up a post at the weekend that will introduce the new people in (and jump in time like two weeks or something).
How would that sound?
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