We didn't reach any conclusion on Erbarnd and Lithor leaving, right?
The current confusion is kind of making it difficult for me to write. So what would you people think if I took
Groin's parting post and checked it, and tried to make it make a bit more sense (correct Scyrr's name and maybe edit his actions a bit - and the women's, because I don't think
Groin was portraying Ginna and Frodides fairly or coherently) but sort of respectfully to his original idea and keeping his characters' thoughts and dialogues and then posted the edited post on this thread so that
Pio could replace
Groin's original post with my slightly edited version and we could continue writing?
I'm all for Scyrr and Erbrand having a fight, and even the women thinking Scyrr is dead and Erbrand being scared by that... All kinds of suggestions are welcome from you other writers but I would prefer start working on it soon, so if I post something and you think it could be made better, just tell me and I will do further editing.
I will also try to contact
Kath and get her revise Erbrand and Kara's parting scene because (with all respect to
Groin) I have the feeling she might not approve thoroughly...
Once I'm done with editing, I will write for my characters, and I have the feeling I want Wulfric and Wilheard to be the ones to spot wounded Scyrr first....
