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Originally Posted by Inziladun
*note to self: if Agan's not coming after me, she's probably evil.*.
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Dear Master
Inziladun,
Having looked over your proposal, we are pleased to say that we enjoyed your thoughts and would like to publish your newsletter. However, we ask that you make a few changes (noted in bold on your original draft) to ensure the highest quality material for our readers. We strive for brevity and clarity here, and look forward to you joining our team upon receiving your second draft. Thank you for your interest.
Sincerely,
The Management