Well, thank you for reading, anyway, Nev. Maybe if I read it over again, something will "pop out". Maybe I just have too much on my mind at the moment. I haven't touched the story in a while. Like I said, I know where I want it to go, it's just getting there from where I am! [img]smilies/tongue.gif[/img]
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Sam looked from bank to bank uneasily. The trees had seemed hostile before, as if they harboured secret eyes and lurking dangers; now he wished that the trees were still there. He felt that the company was on a river that was the frontier of war.
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Giving thanks unto the Father...In whom we have redemption through His blood, even the forgiveness of sins.~Colossians1:12a,14
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I am Samwise son of Hamfast, if by hoe or trowel I can get these weeds out of your garden, I will.You have my shears!;)
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