[NyteSky]

Nice! Finally the long neglected genre of hobbit adventurers is being used again at last! It was fun reading, where's it going to go from there? You could probably use some more characters. 2 adventurers isn't enough to get most quests done, or make them gripping. Great job with the characterizations so far though! Even the dialogue parts were interesting. I never would have thought of including Christianity that way either. Well, good luck with it! Make sure you let me know when you update it, I'd like to read it.