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Old 07-27-2019, 01:47 AM   #3137
Huinesoron
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Huinesoron is battling Black Riders on Weathertop.Huinesoron is battling Black Riders on Weathertop.
That is really clever.

It's not right, but it's clever! And it's the right sort of thinking: the Red and Small are specific groups of... let's say 'people' for simplicity, though most wouldn't use it of the Red.

Don't forget the second half! Line 4 is a specific incident, but line 3 is more general to the character.

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