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Old 08-18-2019, 10:38 AM   #3323
Galadriel55
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Galadriel55 is lost in the dark paths of Moria.Galadriel55 is lost in the dark paths of Moria.Galadriel55 is lost in the dark paths of Moria.Galadriel55 is lost in the dark paths of Moria.
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Originally Posted by Urwen View Post
Here is a novel idea, multiple people and two locations are involved.


Windless, yet animate,
With air of demise, -
This is Gondolin
I'll wilt if I leave
My home, your paradise -
"....then let her stay; let the bird return to her cage, where she'll wilt as she has wilted before....."
Gleaming and beautiful,
All polished silver -
I am the hope
That brings you to the river -
Gondolin again
But temper desire:
I'll be your demise. -
via poisonous sharp shaft
Once caught, you'll reject me.
Take the master's advice. -
"Return to your dwelling, for my heart warns me that if you follow those who love you no longer, you'll never return there again."
Erm... so what is your answer? Who is the speaker? Who is spoken to?
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