The utilisation of a structure-providing narrator would have been invaluable, from my admittedly neutral perspective. Perhaps had one of the mentor/Moderators tied some of the story-lines together with some strategically placed posts, the story would not have seemed so formless.
I wrote this whilst at work, so rather than the infamous two cents, this post cost _______________, LLC approximately $2.73 at around 7 minutes of my time.
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[Edit] It doesn't look like much typing for seven minutes, I know, but I spent the majority of that time working out what the post was worth...
[ November 13, 2002: Message edited by: Rimbaud ]
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