Just a couple language notions. But tell me if I should just mine my own business.
I'm choosing to by NOT picky about descriptions.
Character words and thoughts are another matter.
Actually, these aren't even suggestions for change; just points to ponder, and if you feel like using them, great. If not, that's fine too. But I'll let you know if there's one or so that I consider "egregious" (latinate).
post #167:
Latinate: demanding / Anglo-Saxon: urging
post # 168:
Latinate: languish (great word by the way!) / Norman English: moulder / Anglo-Saxon / waste away
Actually, that's all for now. I'll shut up now.
LMP