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1) Vala-02.45: The addition about Varda from MT is okay for me.
4) Vala-04.3: I think the attributes of being a death goddess were lost for Niënna in the later legendary. So I agree to gandalf85 that this addition is critical.
5) Vala-05.25: Of these names only ‘Tuivána’ is used later. Nonetheless the adition could be considered.
6) Vala-06: Ómar is used later, so we could add him, but I think it was by intention that the sub-chapter ends with Olorin.
Vala-07.23b: In thah way it would mean that Eru was a created power, which is not true.
Vala-07: I am okay with removing the apostrophes.
Respectfully
Findegil
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