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Old 10-31-2003, 07:47 AM   #47
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A like the changes in Aiwendils passage also. But I have a small detail to comment:
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Then Gothmog Lord of Balrogs gathers all his demons [and monsters] that were about the city ...
What kind of monsters are here intended? I think we have discussed that already in the mechanical monsters thread. My addition was there:
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§71 Then Gothmog Lord of Balrogs gathers all his demons [and troops] that were about the city and ...
But I think we could also take
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§71 Then Gothmog Lord of Balrogs gathers all his demons [and bands] that were about the city and ...
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