Looks good, Elora! There is only one thing I can see that really needs correction:
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There is found Lespheria and Amandur, Elves who remain.
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Amandur is a Ranger rather than an elf.
Otherwise, aside from a few typos, it looks really good! [img]smilies/smile.gif[/img]
Oh! and, um, who is Aerwyn?
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Aerwyn nodded in satisfaction and sought the kitchens.
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[ August 15, 2003: Message edited by: Ealasaid ]