My post is up. If I've gotten anything wrong about your characters, let me know. Though please don't forget that this is Dorran's perception.
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Now Tevildo was a mighty cat--the mightiest of all--and possessed of an evil spirit,...and he was in Melko's constant following; and that cat had all cats subject to him, and he and his subjects were the chasers and getters of meat for Melko's table.
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