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Aiwendil · 12-13-2002, 02:39 PM

I have reviewed the changes here and have only one point of contention, concerning FG-T-15. I'm inclined to delete the whole discussion of the relative statures of Tuor and the Elves. I know that Jallanite made a case for including it, but I simply think the whole matter is too uncertain. Tuor might still be taller than any of the Elves present - or he might not. I would suggest going back to my original emendation; i.e., simply deleting the whole from "'Tis written" to "by love".

Other than that, I don't have any problems with this section. If anyone does have any suggestions or comments, we should probably deal with them now.

We seem to be agreed on the names of Gondolin - shall we have a vote on them?

12-13-2002, 02:39 PM	#7
Aiwendil Late Istar Join Date: Mar 2001 Posts: 2,224	I have reviewed the changes here and have only one point of contention, concerning FG-T-15. I'm inclined to delete the whole discussion of the relative statures of Tuor and the Elves. I know that Jallanite made a case for including it, but I simply think the whole matter is too uncertain. Tuor might still be taller than any of the Elves present - or he might not. I would suggest going back to my original emendation; i.e., simply deleting the whole from "'Tis written" to "by love". Other than that, I don't have any problems with this section. If anyone does have any suggestions or comments, we should probably deal with them now. We seem to be agreed on the names of Gondolin - shall we have a vote on them?