I would politely ask Mr. Tolkien to please reconsider the phrasing of 'Praise them with great praise.' Surely there is a way to say this ringingly, without using the same word twice in the same sentence?
I would add more visual detail to the events after the destruction of the ring, and before the Scouring of the Shire.
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Deserves death! I daresay he does... And some die that deserve life. Can you give it to them?
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