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Old 03-04-2008, 03:26 AM   #29
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Originally Posted by littlemanpoet View Post
I'm a stickler over Gaffer Hugo's speech patterns, so I must ask you to revise this just a wee bit. His grammar is admittedly not good standard English, but it's "not good" in a different way than what's in the quote. Please replace it with:
Done. Thanks for nit-picking: it really is just a good thing as it makes the characters more believable.
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