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Old 06-01-2004, 05:57 AM   #320
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The Moon Song...

I haven't written it yet. But (if I do) it will probably compare heartache to the pull of the tide, caused by the love of a shining one who is (or seems!) far out of reach. It will be short; maybe two brief verses, or one long verse, or some such.

EDIT: I was thinking something like this:


Afar I plead from deep and hollow.
Shimmer, glisten, and gaze on me,
For as you rise, I must follow;
O, beckon me.


How you rule me! Though ripple and foam
Heed every wind, yet I, heart-deep
Remain your thrall; heart-hope, heart-home,
Heart-doom you keep.


(The last line of each verse ought to be indented... sigh.)

How one does fuss at these things...
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