Well... let's not lose the momentum again here!
I've thought out an ending scene but really want you all to play into it with your own action. I've setup the location and taken advantage of what Mithadan let us in on in his previous post: a feast.
Now since we have two groups again, it will be very tricky to choreograph the action unless we plan it out. I was hoping for a surprise entry for one of the groups, sort of leading the reader with the brothers until they are in a sticky position.
In any case, keep writing!
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