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Old 10-08-2017, 11:57 AM   #128
Aiwendil
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Glad you agree with my suggestions!

VE-01: A possibility to fix the end of the alliterative fragment here:

Quote:
There sun was softer, [there] the sweet breezes
and whispering winds, there wells of slumber
and the dew enchanted, [their dolour eased.]
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