Araréiel:
A very good post for your first Mortal!
There are a few things though:
1. PLEASE try to improve spelling & grammar; type our post in Microsoft Word first, and use spellcheck.
2. In your post, you constantly refered to Eli's twin as Cynan; it's Eric.
Fix number two and some of number one in your post, and you'll be in!
People applying for the remaining characters:
Go ahead and post the profiles up, but I will not be able to accept them until Sunday evening. If you get it up today, I MAY be able to check in. I'm going camping, so... no computer or anything.
Thanks,
Fëa