Na-RG-27: I think the "," must go as well otherwise I agree:
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NA-RG-27{So fearful his face that Flinding crouched
and watched him,}[Gwindor] {wondering}wondered what webs of doom
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NA-RG-73: I don't think ". . . like graven stone" makes any sense without "standing silent". What about taking a line more into account:
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NA-RG-73 and {Flinding}[Gwindor] knew it {at the feet of the king
}like stone graven{ standing silent}
with heart laden}standing silent; but Húrin's son
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Respectfully
Findegil