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Aiwendil · 04-01-2013, 02:42 PM

I also have VT50 but haven't read it yet. I agree with Findegil that it may be impossible to incorporate it, since there is no very natural place to insert it into the text. The suggestion of putting it in the second paragraph is probably the best we could do, but we still have to invent a sentence about the news of the treachery of the Easterlings, as in Findegil's attempt.

04-01-2013, 02:42 PM	#124
Aiwendil Late Istar Join Date: Mar 2001 Posts: 2,224	I also have VT50 but haven't read it yet. I agree with Findegil that it may be impossible to incorporate it, since there is no very natural place to insert it into the text. The suggestion of putting it in the second paragraph is probably the best we could do, but we still have to invent a sentence about the news of the treachery of the Easterlings, as in Findegil's attempt.