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All right, a double-post. I have posted already, now I think it's up to Gwath's character to react or if somebody else wants to interrupt the scene by coming inside... Anyway, I tried to make the tension-filled, yet kind of still situation just a little more tension-filled.
And just a note, even though it's not been said explicitely anywhere, I have presumed that Bunny had left the common room with the others, as both Gwath's and Kitanna's posts presume that nobody else from the party remained in the room (at least Kitanna's post presumes Peony to be the last one going outside, which seems quite plain).
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