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Old 06-17-2002, 07:22 PM   #61
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Thanks for the explanations! Since your English is superb and my french nonexistant... I have more potentially annoying questions:
Quote:
to explain the bitter sweet pang
of my heart beats for the ones I have no hatred.
Against Fate and Reason I can shatter myself for
Neither of them nor you I‘m disposed to loose
"of my heart beats for the ones I have no hatred"-- it makes sense to my heart, I think, but my head gets confused. Is heartbeats one word? And is he referring to "the ones I have no hatred for" or you could also say-- "for teh ones for whom I have no hatred" but I just killed your rythmic meter! Sorry...?

"Neither of them nor you I'm disposed to lose": does "them" refer to fate and reason, or the ones against whom he has no hatred?

You do good work. I'm not trying to be a pain, I really want to understand what you are getting at. (Now that you've explained the second verse it chokes me up...)
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