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**lindil** · 07-08-2001, 12:50 PM

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Re: Jallanite's sugesstions

well I can see you havn't posted much in a bit.
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I read through everything once and am going to need a couple more readings I think, before responding in substance. If I have any thing to offer[ which after the first reading I doubt!].

One question -
You are proposing the above revisions as a base text w/ possible stylistic revisions to follow?

One general comment. I favor breaking off the FoG at Nan - Tasarinien and puttting everything re: the havens into the final chapter to give it a bit more length as the last chapter and the ruin of doriath will be disproportionately short.

awesome work Jallanite-

am I right in suspecting you have <u>no</u> children? <img src=smile.gif ALT="">

--lindil

</p>Edited by: <A HREF=http://www.barrowdowns.com/cgi-bin/ultimatebb.cgi?ubb=get_profile&u=00000076>lindil</A> at: 7/8/01 6:37:06 pm

07-08-2001, 12:50 PM	#52
lindil Seeker of the Straight Path Join Date: Jul 2000 Location: a hidden fastness in Big Valley nor cal Posts: 1,681	<font face="Verdana"><table><TR><TD><FONT SIZE="1" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">Seeker of the Straight Path Posts: 670</TD><TD></TD></TR></TABLE> Re: Jallanite's sugesstions well I can see you havn't posted much in a bit. <img src=smile.gif ALT=""> I read through everything once and am going to need a couple more readings I think, before responding in substance. If I have any thing to offer[ which after the first reading I doubt!]. One question - You are proposing the above revisions as a base text w/ possible stylistic revisions to follow? One general comment. I favor breaking off the FoG at Nan - Tasarinien and puttting everything re: the havens into the final chapter to give it a bit more length as the last chapter and the ruin of doriath will be disproportionately short. awesome work Jallanite- am I right in suspecting you have <u>no</u> children? <img src=smile.gif ALT=""> --lindil </p>Edited by: <A HREF=http://www.barrowdowns.com/cgi-bin/ultimatebb.cgi?ubb=get_profile&u=00000076>lindil</A> at: 7/8/01 6:37:06 pm __________________ The dwindling Men of the West would often sit up late into the night exchanging lore & wisdom such as they still possessed that they should not fall back into the mean estate of those who never knew or indeed rebelled against the Light.