As I said before, I feel very impotent withe this first chapters and others because my treatment of the texts are far from yours and only can help in minor points.
I cannot conceive to insert texts like Aman or Q&E or The Shibboleth, etc into the pure narrative.
I think the professor use it as references and they would be well as Appendix as he always did. (Well, yes only in Tlotr, but is enough). The same would say about a massive use of filosophic MT into the narrative.
But of course I respect your opinion, is my humble one.
Greetings
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