NKD-SL-02b and
NKD-SL-08.51: Yes, I would remove these.
NKD-SL-04b: Here I am not sure if removal is the right choice. It might be in information worth giving that not many people did know that the Palantir of the Tower Hills still existed. So I would change that passage:
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... That was guarded by the Elves, and though NKD-SL-04c{we never}[few only did] knew it, it remained there, until Círdan put it aboard Elrond’s ship when he left. ...
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Respectfully
Findegil