Sharon
Well done! I like how the difference between Bird's approach and the more traditional desert dwelling maenwaith is shown.
Drew a line for the men . . . good on!
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The young woman scowled: Bird must have had unending kindness and compassion to put up with such people.
Now, having sent her away, he was asking for another favor. By rights, she should turn her back on him. Rama bent down to retrieve her sheets and cart, scowling at the Men and responding coldly, "I have things to occupy me today. I will leave tomorrow before dawn. If you are there, we will see. But I will not wait for you." With that, she turned and left the room.
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