Hmmmm......
I'm just wondering about Surinen's reaction - he would definitely be hostile to any member of Wyrma's family/clan, wouldn't he? (There's no way to avoid introductions, and though using a false name might work for the Eagles who don't know Tinar, the Gondorians would know something's fishy.) And it might give away too much too soon to the Gondorians. Do the others of you that are involved intend to spend much story time on the journey to the City, or will it be summed up briefly so that the plot can carry on? I would go for the latter; then it wouldn't matter if Tinar goes on ahead, since he would meet the others at the destination soon. It seems to me that this would simplify things, and as I see it, they're already complicated enough!
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