RB-DF-11: Very good catch. Agreed.
RB-DF-12; -13: Your editing is good. Agreed.
RB-DF-14: This was discussed under the labels
NA-EX-05 and
NA-TI-02b in the thread
Narn I Chîn Húrin1: Túrins Fostering on page 1. My
Posting #33 gives a good overview.
I agree that the story now as our texts stand are told twice in diffrent words. I agree and tried to do as fare as possible that we should use only the text of
QS to avoid redundant wording. If it is undisiered all together to have the story told twice I would rather skip here the passage dealing with Húrin and Hour alltogether, and not cut anything out of our
Narn version. But if we do so it would be hard to find a reason for Turgon being mentioned here at all. I would rather let the story stand here told very briefly and then in an more ampel scale in the
Narn.
§172: I have to read both accounts again before further comments, but I think my interpretation was based on the view that there is diffrence between Hithlum and Mithrim. I will come back to this point.
Respectfuly
Findegil