EPE-EX-12.5: I do not think it is explicit enough to warrant a deletion, but I suppose there is no real harm.
EPE-EX-12.6: Ah, I was not thinking. I agree.
On a side not, are you taking up the heading "Aman" as well for a subheading in the chapter?
Personally, I am against its inclusion here. It is told from the point of view of a Man discussing the nature of Aman. Thus, the Eldar are referenced in the third person, and terms such as "we must not forget that..." Overall, it is a philosophical musing of someone who has never been to Aman about what it is like in its nature. I am more inclined to keep it separate.
Last edited by ArcusCalion; 11-08-2017 at 05:35 PM.
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