Nay. Why would Oromė be there twice? And why would there be the parentheses? Btw the fact that Oromė is there twice, or in other words, there are two Oromės (includes hint), could help you if you think about it.
Okay, maybe if I write it another way, it will be more apparent:
1. Aulė
2. Oromė
3. Yavanna
4. Oromė (or Mandos + Nienna)
5. Manwė + Varda (or Irmo)
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