Thanks for posting Raefindan, Helen!
Just a few verrrrry minor quibbles (if you feel like fixing them fine but don't feel obligated):
Raefindan would speak in contractions: don't, I'm, we're, can't, etc.
His vocal filler would be a silent pause instead of "ah" - and if you can find a place where I've used vocal filler besides silence, prove me wrong and I'll just blush.
Instead of Good sir, he'd say "sir"
The last couple of questions were great! I could not have done any better. Verrrrry nice touch.
