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6 Of Eldamar and the Princes of the Eldalië
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ArcusCalion
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EPE-EX-21.05
: I would use "especially" instead of "as". This flows better, and holds the meaning of the original more I think.
EPE-EX-23.2
: I would recommend deleting it.
EPE-EX-31.1
: sounds good.
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