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Old 02-12-2008, 05:33 AM   #369
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Okay. Seems like Valesse isn't coming.

What do you Eomer think:
Quote:
Originally Posted by me
Shall we write it as if the adventure had been completed?

or

Should we write it so that Eomeleo just deserts and goes? And maybe takes Valesseka with him?

And my characters...
I personally am tempted to write that Jen proves just as untrustworthy as Eomeleo suspected and steals the Elves' money and horses and rides away and that's the end of the story for her, but I'm not sure, I would liked to have seen her becoming a "better" person.

Thin-Gloomy could die or escape, depending on how gentle I feel. If the three humans just run off, I can end my Thin-Gloomy post with saying that when the diminished party of his rescuers (meaning the Elves and Dárin) finally arrived, T-G was gone, or that both T-G and his captors were gone.

Personally I could go for whichever ending.
I think I'd prefer a "desertion ending", it would leave the story to feel less unfinished. But whichever is fine with me.
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