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Aiwendil · 03-01-2004, 03:46 PM

I suppose we are agreed on dropping The Horns of Ulmo - for the present, at least. I do think it's unfortunate to lose the poem. Out of the possibilities raised so far, to be honest, I like my proposal for a line 5 transition best. So, in my opinion, if that is too liberal a change, then the poem is unusable.

If we are indeed agreed on this point, then our first draft of The Fall of Gondolin is done. We need only await Antoine's/Maedhros's text.

03-01-2004, 03:46 PM	#48
Aiwendil Late Istar Join Date: Mar 2001 Posts: 2,224	I suppose we are agreed on dropping The Horns of Ulmo - for the present, at least. I do think it's unfortunate to lose the poem. Out of the possibilities raised so far, to be honest, I like my proposal for a line 5 transition best. So, in my opinion, if that is too liberal a change, then the poem is unusable. If we are indeed agreed on this point, then our first draft of The Fall of Gondolin is done. We need only await Antoine's/Maedhros's text.