I would be ok using:
Then Turgon {king} [King] of Gondolin robed in white with a belt of gold, <TO tallest of all the [living] Children of the World, save Thingol,>
Are you guys ok with that then?
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Originally posted by Aiwendil
I hesitate to make the addition from LQ2 concerning Idril's hair. My only reason is that I think we ought to use it instead in the section on the Building of Gondolin, where it is in LQ2 - and I do not think we should use exactly the same sentence in two places. I suppose we could delete it from the Building of Gondolin and put it in here, but I don't think we should move text around like that without a very good reason.
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How did I know that you were going to say something like that. I think that if we used that in the earlier section, it should not be used exactly here. I wonder if we could get away mentioning her hair colour or if it would be better to delete the reference.