Sounds excellent, Tevildo. I am very glad that you are going to write a response for Dorran.
Remember, as you write your many serious objections, Athwen is submissive and won't go against Dorran, but wait patiently for his word and permission. So just write whatever you want, so long as it fits.
So, our first step towards this is Lindir approaching Dorran with the question of how to get the Slavers where we need them, correct?
Looking forward to this!
-- Folwren