I like how we are making the bad guys have a voice, "will this be the end of my short miserable life?" It's much better than the stereotypical we-are-evil-and-we-like-it enemies of the norm.
Good work!
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I have just pulled a sickie, and with no wellbeing to do anything I am waiting in my room with my laptop, fingernails in my mouth and rocking back and forth for a post...