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hello again
The differences between this part and mine are minor in narrative structure, except for (I know it were discussed before by you) that i keep Androg dead, and Dirhaval could extract the information from elves (even Gil-galad as son of Orodreth) that flew to the Mouths of Sirion or the Isle of Balar. And in the prologue is not mentioned the source.
The other difference is that I wrote the text of the lay as prose. But in Spanish, of course, there´s no alliteration when is translated, and in an epic tale like this the rhetorical language can be omitted. (In Beren only was kept firstly in the passages of "love", that looks like better).
Greetings
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